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2008-07-20 07:44:17

Last author: Your Brompton Cocktail
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The Night After
... he had felt this feeling before, guilt, fear, but at the same time, anxious, and happy but no matter what he did, in a way he dreaded the hours that were coming up before him.
She would be there in about a half hour it will be the first time that he had seen her in almost 3 months, *and after tonight she'll be gone, in an intimate way, for a long time, if not forever* he thought to himself as he got his room ready. But oddly enough that’s not what scared him at the moment, he wants it to be perfect, he has things to do before the sex happens, but he wants it all to glide together seamlessly. From piercing her ears, to the movie afterwards.
He also has to remember that, unless she starts it, he has to get everything out of the way before THAT happens. "sigh... I need to stop thinking about it and get ready, she'll be here soon" he said out loud. He looked around the room, making sure everything was in place before gathering up some clothes to start laundry after he showered. After dropping his clothes in the laundry room he got some clean ones and went into the bathroom. He started undressing and turning on the hot water first. *I do like a hot shower* he smiled to himself turning on the cold water slightly. when he stepped into the shower he gasped, maybe moaned a little at the heat of the shower. He started to lather himself up he wanted to be all neat and tidy for her, but if not anything, that was one thing he was good at. Looking down he noticed that he was starting to get a little hard *heh if that’s one thing I don’t like about hot showers its cause I cant leave the bathroom for a few minutes afterwards* he thought and almost laughed to himself. He looked at the clock, *she’s going to be here in a few minutes* he thought, * I should probably get out of the shower soon*. He got out of the shower and dried himself off, making sure his hair was dry, but not too dry so that it could be put into a pony tail and be straight when he took it out.
After getting dressed he heard the doorbell ring.*that was quick* he thought as he went to open the door. When he opened it, she was standing there, looking at him, she looked amazing, but also he hadn’t seen her in almost three months. He wanted to tackle her right there, right then but he held himself back and led her to his room by the arm. Once they got there he sat her down on his bed, talked a bit and then he looked at her “well, want me to finish your ears now?” she looked at him and smiled “maybe…” He stood up and went over to get his piercing kit, but she stopped him with her leg. “what are you doing? “ “what does it look like?” she grinned at him “but I thought you wanted me to wait untill after we had talked and I had finished your ears” he said in a questioning voice “well maybe I want to do that after” she said as she pulled him by the edge of his pants, so their faces were only centimeters away “Brier” she said “I want you, I may not love you anymore, but I want you one last time and I want you now!” *I just don’t get this girl sometimes* he thought to himself * one moment she says she’ll come over but there will be nothing but talking, now she is looking me right in the eyes telling me she wants to fuck me? It’s so confusing*
They sat there, just staring into each others eyes for a few minutes, wondering who will go first. She looked at him, sighed, and leaned forward kissing him pulling him onto her. As he looked into her eyes, he remembered every time they had done this and how wonderful it had been. He started to kiss her again, running his hands up her sides felling every curve of her body. If this really was to be the last time, he wanted to savor it, worship it go over every curve, freckle, feel, see, taste it all. She could almost sense what he was thinking because she looked him right in the eyes and held his hand, leading it up her leg, then to her hip, slowly as to let him feel her, then her sides, all the way to her neck then along her chest, and her breasts. He ran his fingertips along her nipples, lightly, feeling them start to get hard under his touch, he bent his lips down to them, slowly taking one in between his teeth and nibbling on it, sliding his teethe back and forth, at the same time he was rubbing and caressing her other breast. she started to moan softly pressing her chest toward his face. he loved the sound of her voice, no matter if she was passionately moaning, yelling his name as she came to climax, or just talking to him, he wanted to hear more. He slightly bit down on her nipple and she gasped and moaned in ecstasy. her started undressing her slowly. Pants first then socks, then finally her panties. "you look amazing" he said to her, lust filling his eyes. "I don’t think so, but you never have lied to me have you Brier?" she said to him with a smile. He just grinned at her as he kissed down her stomach and legs, then back up to her hips, licking and teasing her hip bone. He started to slide his tongue ring down her pelvic bone, kissing ever so lightly as he went “more" she moaned, grabbing a tuft of hair and guiding his head. he licked from her panty line, straight down the middle of her pelvis, gliding his tongue ring over her clit. She shuddered and moaned at the feeling of it. He noticed this and started to flick his tongue on her clit, slowly at first then moving it more rapidly, untill he didn’t think he could anymore. "yes... oh my god yes" she moaned squeezing his hair a little. He then licked down and started to slide his tongue inside of her, tasting her, he loved it, she tasted like sugar and spice. He couldn’t get enough. He licked her faster and faster, swirling his tongue inside of her. He wanted her to come right then and there so he could taste it when it hit his tongue, he started to wiggle his tongue, so it was inside of her, but his tongue was pierced pretty far back so the ring would rub and tap her clit as he licked her. He loved to taste her, she was so smooth, warm, and wet. He started to rub her clit pressing on it lightly at first. “oh god yes. Faster…” she moaned, grabbing a tuft of hair and pulling lightly “I’m going to …I’m coming..” *oh no your not, not yet* he thought to himself. He stopped licking her and started pulling off his clothes. He kissed her stomach and pulled off his pants, then kissed her lips and slid off his boxers. “I want you in me NOW!” she almost screamed “I’m getting there” he said in her ear in a low whisper. He slowly started sliding his cock inside of her, first the head, then slow down *wait for her to beg* he thought to himself. “please brier… more “ she moan. He shoved his cock all the way inside elf her hard and fast and stated thrusting in and out of her, feeling her warmth wash over his cock. He kissed her neck as she moaned in his ear “faster… yes!” He started to lick and suck on her nipple, nibbling on it, then doing the same to the other as he fucked her just how she liked it. “I’m going to come soon” he said in almost a moan “yes… oh god please yes!” She moaned back at him. He thrust in and pulled out of her as hard and deep as he could until he couldn’t go anymore and felt the tip of his cock start to pulse as her pussy started to quiver on his cock, he couldn’t take it anymore. She was almost screaming in moans, and he was moaning to, finally he let go and cam the biggest load he ever had. He bent down and lightly bit her shoulder as they climaxed together. When it was over they laid beside each other, panting and kissing. “that was amazing brier…”
She said with a smile “thank you. You weren’t so bad yourself…maybe we could do this again sometime”
And all she did was look into his eyes and kissed him before curling up and falling asleep beside him.

FIN

2008-07-24 [Misanthropy]: pretty good. A few spelling errors, but no points against you for those. XD I did kind of get lost a couple times because the lines are all packed together so tight. I read a couple lines twice by accident. lol. but other than layout, twas good *thumbs up*

2008-07-24 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: lol thanks allot

2008-07-24 [Misanthropy]: *smiles* you're welcome

I hope I wasn't too harsh in that constructive criticism?

2008-07-24 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: no it is ok, it helps

2008-07-28 [Misanthropy]: ok, that's good.

2008-07-29 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: thanks

2008-09-13 [the lonely wolf]: this is really good

2008-09-19 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: thanks very mutch

2008-09-19 [the lonely wolf]: your welcome

2008-09-28 [lyon's mane]: nicely written, work on the thoughts to self though....they seem a bit odd.

2008-09-28 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: they are meant to be, its a true story

2008-09-28 [Majestic Nightmare of Massacre]: -giggles- its good though

2008-09-28 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: well true to an extent i mean, and thanks kitty

2008-09-28 [lyon's mane]: kitty, you know im a knit picker on writings.

2008-09-28 [Majestic Nightmare of Massacre]: -nods- meh know. and i loves ya for it

2008-09-28 [lyon's mane]: *nuzzles you*

2008-09-28 [Majestic Nightmare of Massacre]: -smiles and nuzzles- welcies bromption

2008-09-28 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: *dances around cause everyne likes his story*

2008-09-28 [Majestic Nightmare of Massacre]: -giggles-

2008-09-28 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: *dances untill be bonks his head on a shelf and plops down*...ow

2008-09-28 [Majestic Nightmare of Massacre]: -dashes over- you okie dokie?

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